Today Neil looked at our animatic and gave us tree bits of advice to improve it.
- He didn't like it with the three heads one straight after the other, suggesting we should make the train go past four times and the guy looks four times.
- We should cut into the guy closer each time as it would help to show the annoyance building up.
- We should have the crossing at more of an angle to get a better perspective
Below is an animatic with the first to adjustments:
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